Hikaru Mizuki

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Name:
Hikaru Mizuki
(ヒカル ミズキ) (水木ヒカル)

Age:
17

Gender:
Male

Height:
1,80 m

Weight:
70 kg

Eye color:
Red

Hair color:
Green

Ethnicity:
Japan

Other informations:
Psychodriver

Likes:
Volleyball, martial arts, drawing, jokes, J-pop music, cheering people up.

Dislikes:
Close-minded people, arrogant people, spiders, being costantly disturbed, crowded places, being under everyone's attention.

Biography:
A guy from another dimension. Born from Nanako Ohguro and Kintaro Mizuki, Hikaru grows on the moon, studying and training. Starts to train as a pilot in Gespenst simulation programs after becoming 12.
5 years after, during the Dimensional Gespenst's activation test, Hikaru's parents because of an unknown meteor and teleports in this world.

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Mobile Weapon:
Model Number:
GM-01 (Ghost Machine 01)

Code Name:
Ultimate Gespenst (initial)
Dimensional Gespenst (final)

Manufacturer:
N/A

Operator:
Hikaru Mizuki

Power Source:
Prototype D-Extractor

Height:
23,4 metres

Weight:
82,3 tons

Propulsion:
Dimensional Power Thrusters

Armament:
Plasma Cutter;
Split Missile;
Prototype DEC Stakes

Equipment:
Dimensional Rift Generator

Finishing Moves:
Gespenst Punch;
Gespenst Kick;
Gespenst Explosive Fist;
Dimensional Gespenst Combo
(次元ゲシュペンストコンボ Jigen Gespenst combo):
A combo which consists in attacking the target with Plasma Cutter while teleporting repeatedly.
The combo's finishing strike will be a powerful Gespenst Punch.

Description:
Its aspect is really similiar to a black Gespenst MKII, but taller and with 3 stakes for hand.

History:
The Gespenst was made from Hikaru's mother Nanako Ohguro, who made it as a Test-Type model.
However, a strange meteor destroyed the control structure on Mars, leaving Nanako and Kintaro near to death and the planet in ruin.
Both his parents ordered the son Hikaru to leave and follow the rift.
Hikaru wanted to help them, but they insisted to go.
Following Nanako and Kintaro's last wishes, Gespenst sucks Hikaru in the rift and teleports to his right side.
After that, Mars explodes and takes Hikaru's parents with itself.
It's rumored/believed that the two's souls are now in the Gespenst's OS.
 
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GEAR

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For the profile:
-I like that you incorporated the likes and other smaller details to flesh it out.
-Please include a picture, or description of their appearance.
-The information in the profile should be written as a pair of paragraphs, and the grammar needs some work.

For the Gespenst:

-Per our discussion, please change the power source to "Prototype D-Extractor".
-Due to the new power source and incorporating Dimensional Energy Crystal into the design, the weight will go up to about 82 tons.
-The propulsion type should be "Dimensional Power thrusters"
-Manufacturer should be either the company from HIkaru's original world, or the name of the maker.
-Armor material only needs to be listed if it's non-standard, so that can be omitted.
-Can you describe the nature of the Smash Beam? Is it like the Gespenst S's built in beam cannon?
-By stacks, do you mean stakes? The Energy Stakes should be changed to "Prototype DEC Stake x (however many it has overall, I'm assuming six, unless it's akin to a Mk-II type G as the base)"
-"Myths" should probably be changed to "It's rumored/believed that the two's souls are now in the OS." - do you mean this literally, or figuratively?
-Lastly, please describe the finisher "Jigen Hissatsu" in detail.